After class, today, chatting with one of my students who is a fairly new immigrant from Turkey, we shared how the sadness in the world saps our creativity.
Understandably, she is worried about her family and friends after the recent events in Turkey and with family and friends in the UK, USA, and Europe I too seem to be in a constant state of worry – as well as being concerned for my Turkish student and other Turkish friends!
It is too easy to tune into ABC24 and the plethora of social media news, too easy to become addicted or obsessed about hearing the latest updates, too easy to be stressed, too easy to focus on anything but writing!
I tend to be a worrier but also highly sensitive to other people’s woes – compassion a core family value, along with a sense of social responsibility and community.
My writing can be therapy and escapism, as well as a way to try and make sense or understand the indefensible, irrational and the unfathomable aspects of human nature and behaviour. I don’t keep a journal but often scribble my feelings into notebooks or fashion a poem or short piece of prose.
Times of emotional trauma or physical upheaval make it difficult to concentrate and when local or global tragedies occur, focus on substantial creative projects wanes, or is lost completely.
Thank goodness for writing classes!
Regardless of how empty I feel, once I’m in the safe space of my writing classes with the lesson plan in hand I let my imagination loose for the 15-20 minutes of stream of consciousness writing that is the ‘splurge’.
Sitting beside my students, I can become a writer rather than the teacher.
The skills of fiction and nonfiction are not mutually exclusive, and mastering or even flirting with one can have a transformative effect on the other.
Zachary Petit, Writer’s Digest
Today, we concentrated on the importance of opening lines. Not just because it is important to grab the reader’s attention but also as a way of jump-starting our imagination.
It never ceases to amaze me the variety and quality of the stories random splurges produce and today was no different.
A good opening line is a powerful thing: It can grab an editor’s attention, set the tone for the rest of the piece, and make sure readers stay through The End!
Jacob M. Appel
This is why it is called a HOOK – just like a fish at the end of the line, you want to keep your readers hanging in there!
Splurge – Try one of these story openings:
- He’d always had the perfect golf grip. The one he used on the gun wasn’t bad, either.
- Palm trees always reminded me of him/her. (You can substitute any other flora)
- Parker was definitely not singing in the rain.
- I think that after you lose your car keys three days in a row, you should just be able to stay home.
- The devil always finds work for idle hands to do, according to Mr Smith our science teacher – and he should know.
- My alter-ego came to life one summer in 1975. (Or another date!)
- The scraping noise was Grandfather’s chair on the flagged tile floor.
- ‘Who is it, Madeleine?’
- The crushed carcass of the car outside the corner garage revealed a truth Constable Thomson didn’t want to face.
Mairi Neil (flash fiction of 750 words)
The scraping noise was Grandfather’s chair on the slate floor, but why is he in the kitchen now?
The clock in the hallway, ticked, whirred, and chimed the half-hour. Tim checked his Father’s fob watch on the bedside table: 3.30am.
How did Grandfather manage the stairs by himself – and why? Is Mum downstairs too? Tim held his breath, but no tell-tale cough announced his mother’s presence; no whistle of steam from the kettle on the range.
When Mum’s in the kitchen, there’s always the clink of china cups, although this is a strange hour for a tea party.
Another creak, low and sinister, followed by the scraping noise again.
Tim imagined the chair rocking back and forth in front of the wood-fired stove. The old man huddling forward, gnarled hands stretching towards the open oven door, willing the radiated heat to warm arthritic bones.
Mum must be there – who else stoked and lit the fire? Tim concentrated; listened for murmuring voices.
The morning ritual always the same; Grandfather and his crook legs and weak heart only make it downstairs by leaning on Mum’s arm and gripping the bannister.
Maybe they couldn’t sleep and Mum lit the fire to keep the old man company and now they’re absorbed in one of the story-telling sessions they seem to like so much. Always talking about the past. Tim often wished he had a time machine like the man in the book he borrowed from the library.
He burrowed deeper into warm bedclothes, his small face, a flat white stone in an inky river of shadows. His breath drifted in uneven puffs in the cold air and twitching his nose his eyes widened with remembering. If Grandfather is rocking in front of the fire he’d be smoking his pipe, a habit he said helped him count his blessings. But no pungent tobacco smoke wafted up the staircase to cloud the room.
An asthmatic cough from the room across the hall punctuated the night before fading into gentle snoring almost immediately.
And Mum is still asleep. Who is downstairs? A thief? Tim shuddered. Who could make an intruder leave?
So many homeless men living by the railway line. Men who cadged meals and money before stowing away on one of the frequent goods trains that crisscrossed the land. Desperate men with nothing to lose. Men fighting to survive bad economic times.
Has one broken in and settled by the fire? Tim’s eyelids flickered and he fought back tears. Troubled blue eyes stared at the dresser, found the photograph of his father, pale in the muted moonlight shining through threadbare curtains.
If only the mining accident hadn’t happened, Dad would make the intruder leave. Tim clenched his teeth.
He remembered the burly man at the door yesterday. His offer to chop wood for two shillings – the price of a flagon of sherry.
Mum confessed their poverty and offered a sandwich. The man’s hairy top lip twisted. ‘Only if there’s dessert,’ he said, menacing eyes staring too long at Mum’s chest before returning to her flushed face.
Tim sensed his Mum’s fear as she slammed the door, rammed the bolt across, pressed her shaking body against the entrance as if the oak panels needed help to keep the man out.
His ten-year-old hands fisted, but Grandfather’s restraining hand on his shoulder held him firm. He hated the old man for his whispered, ‘You’re too young, boy,’ but had a rush of pity when Grandfather added, ‘and I’m too old.’
Blood surged in Tim’s ears. He gripped the bedsheets, his racing heartbeat competing with the scraping and rumbling below. He must go downstairs and face the intruder, prove to Grandfather he was not too young, prove to Mum he could protect her.
The curtains billowed and a gust of even colder air swirled around the room. Tim froze. Perhaps it was a ghost downstairs. Dad or Grandmother visiting – they both had favoured the chair by the fire. The scraping noise accompanied by a rustling as if hands searched canisters.
An almighty crash followed the rattling of crockery. Tim cowered under the blankets until a shattering of glass and china was joined by grunting and snarling.
And his Mum spluttering, ‘Damn possums!’
Tim searched for his slippers and met his mother in the hallway as she recovered from a coughing fit.
They hurried downstairs. A tremulous smile playing on Tim’s lips as the stairs creaked and Grandfather’s chair scraped on the slate floor.
It’s a helluva start, being able to recognize what makes you happy.
Writing makes me happy.
Why not choose a first line and write a story – escape from sadness and tragedy for a few moments with some flash fiction fun!
4 thoughts on “Escapism Via Flash Fiction”
Mairi – you brighten my day and then tighten the ribcage against my heart with the tension of your flash fiction – and I’d just come in from sweeping up the front again after those bl##*y possums. Seems I can’t get away from them. Big hugs, Maureen xxx
Thank you for reading the post, Maureen and your kind comment – totally sympathise re possums but at least they’re outside:)